Kia Ora Quinn from Blaketown School! I’m Sofia from Wainui Beach School as you know we are your tuhi mai tuhi atu school!
I like how you have told how you are going to improve your behaviour. Also Your work is in paragraphs and that's great!
I can really relate to this actually… Like when someone is talking I will daze off and then focus again and have no idea what's happening. Also there are some silly people in my class as well so I try to avoid them.
Maybe next time, don’t use slang language (gonna rather than going to) and capitals.
Gonna which is the word you used on the first sentence is a slang word if that makes sense. So gonna is going to but shorter if that makes any sense at all. Great work over all though!
Kia Ora Quinn from Blaketown School! I’m Sofia from Wainui Beach School as you know we are your tuhi mai tuhi atu school!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have told how you are going to improve your behaviour. Also Your work is in paragraphs and that's great!
I can really relate to this actually… Like when someone is talking I will daze off and then focus again and have no idea what's happening. Also there are some silly people in my class as well so I try to avoid them.
Maybe next time, don’t use slang language (gonna rather than going to) and capitals.
Great work overall!!
From Sofia.
Oh ok i cant remeber me using slang language
DeleteKia Ora Quinn,
ReplyDeleteGonna which is the word you used on the first sentence is a slang word if that makes sense. So gonna is going to but shorter if that makes any sense at all. Great work over all though!
-Sofia
Oh
ReplyDeleteBut hey thanks for letting me know
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